Friday Fictioneers: “Biggest Backyard”

by Fred Fingery

Biggest Backyard

I’m listening for her chain-jingle on the wrong side of our fence. Moving through the dry bamboo reeds we use as swords, the trees running branch tips through my hair. I consider the ticks, droplets bobbing on the leaves, bouncing in the summer dank . I call for her but I only hear the birds, and cricket squeak, and my brother shouting her name through cupped hands. Offering treats. “Bone!” He sounds serious.

Someone’d left the gate open—a crack—and she’s gone. Like that.

(it was my brother)

The woods behind my house feel like the biggest backyard—like there’s maybe a fence to keep her in, but it’s somewhere on the other side of the world.

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15 Comments to “Friday Fictioneers: “Biggest Backyard””

  1. nicely done and that is a happy dog out there exploring.
    here is mine http://yaralwrites.com/

  2. Awwww, man. That one hits right at home — after I got over the ticks bouncing. Poor kids.

  3. I liked the stream of consciousness feel to that (maybe that’s not the right term, but whatever style you used, it worked well). It felt like summertime and to a kid and especially a kid with a great imagination, the backyard feels like a huge world.

  4. Love the bouncing ticks. The image I mean. Don’t like ticks otherwise. I like the way that it was written, too. Well done. Mine’s here: http://marilynkaydennis.wordpress.com/2012/06/15/madison-woods-friday-fictioneers-witch

  5. Hopefully, the prodigal dog will return home.

    Here’s mine: http://logo-ligi.com/2012/06/15/six-oclock/

  6. I am always most interested in the story being told. I can see a bounding dog, unfettered, following a raised nose and running like a deer. He will return when he gets hungry, that is when we all come home. Nicely done.

    http://thebradleychronicles.wordpress.com/2012/06/14/flash-fiction-friday-letting-go/

  7. I would not want to be that brother…a spanking is overdue. However, I would be worried more about the bouncing ticks than the dog…they always return. Here’s mine:
    http://www.triplemoonstar.blogspot.com

  8. Hope the dog gets back safely.

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